It is my birthday today. When I get home today, my family should be waiting to celebrate my birthday. I am really excited, and I hope I get the present that I want. The new Call of Duty game for my Xbox One. RRRIIINNGG! Went the school bell. I rushed to my locker to get my bag and ran off down the stairs. I was sprinting to my house. When I opened the door to my house all the lights were off. It wasn’t until I got to my living room when all of a sudden, “SURPRISE!” My family screamed.
I think this short story will be about something to do with her 11th birthday and maybe the events that happen or what happens normally when she turns 11.
Why did Rachel not want to own up about the sweater?
Was the red sweater ugly or gross or both?
Why did Rachel fell so embarrassed about the sweater?
I think that when Rachel ha the party she would not remember the red sweater incident, because I think she will be enjoy the celebration with all the cake and birthday presents.
One day, me and my family were at a carnival. There were little food and game stores all over the place. There were also some big rides like the carousel and a giant slide. “Mum, can we go on the carousel?” my brother asked.
“Sure,” my mum replied.
We walked over to the carousel and everyone in my family wanted to go on it. We had to wait a while in the line. We were at the front of the line and they let us in. But before we jumped onto our carousel, the horses came alive and ran away!