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Goal: to not rush to the problem.

One day I was exploring a wide and long cave. It was near a swamp. I was worried because I might dirty my new orange t shirt and it could collapse within. I had my dad with me to explore the cave, we went in but it was unusually structured. It had smooth parts all over the place and some scale marks imprinted in the dirt. I was starting to get a little bit worried. I could hear something coming from where we entered, it made a bit of groaning, but then I realised we were in a crocodile’s home!

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  1. Libby Haigh at |

    Well done Declan. I love the goal you set – and you definitely achieved it. This was a very creative way of leading us to the problem and leaving the reader hanging (in a good way). Beautifully crafted piece of writing.


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